Prins H. och honorna – en anti-oidipedal uppgörelse
My deer femmily consistance of my M'm O' a-therbother and one fjoully sissybrewd and tzwau scissors and a paterglee abscensfadder with the meresmoukeleft (schhheeleft o'jo) and a schmell suchof anamorph Pieeire odd-on-sea grieetchk silenes puton mute and unhimspeccable, sinse nobodyououghttofighthim. That Basturdlonggone. Femmtyever. And in this hijord, O Motherplane, all daze galaxazellas dancing the savageannanas with tuttifrutti delecturelight and 'tweenbeeant's win-win zelliueze tigiris tenautaten browniesincuppkaykes ayemshore, oh, gipfts fooh 'em ahahieroaeroarenaahnoohohohahohohahahearahahoahohaahahnastronauts — : rubbahbarbellas flooting indiepinditly ungravidatittity – { mayhops jatex perhelpsor uh pessuoah (?) } – Mitraza. Jodjayn. Ay-fohndya! : — stunning in entlohs rauhs of schlangenmannlines wit simble gemblers and pokedemahplayhas intothe promisus queens annamused muscletears, as mhaisuitescissors oozing their geheimered secrets theire meire adextraction gems twoe allofyou buffalobills and tigerwoodsholeinones thirdmazerunners mordanwillington tsu gewaltsknollen und behtekken on sexmarkt hottzensplotz picknickfilzfreehdze fraucosti thegreenah off curse; and as amayh – O, hooemmayh (?) – in this Clunch Da Clana: a balasstabakakkalakkabalakkship poik omfuten; a toddleless pirate; (— O Quak! ey yess ;—), say-Lord-lilly-boi, solesailing on a Hafvaquaahl; a stiefmutherly tweeated, Godomotherchilltie; un wanondfourall abannedoned and morelessthannuffing sworthlos, prikkicanis; – a pingk ponghoo amengst bettie o'joy fuel longlegged mensalukin' schaamlost hun-dai douggieh's thails and Her-smellines? O cuts and puhyamas! A straywing loos ferhungerter peerayaha, diejest ferzerten. Dipdowned in morkretvater. Sultan. Wittanofoods. Greening wit milliards of lessofuse thiiits. Tshiiit. Bitterashell and roovering mah revendsche deep down in da dschungel of grief. A shelfbiographorologgalootzesaurus I shelt right yourass, in an eggzellent dun Juan Muehredahl-sigh!. Wan Thai. Joojuste weight. It is gonnabe heavieasmeddal. And withnoregrets eyeshell enter dar minthfader Königs throowhn. Eeve's Antannually.
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4 kommentarer:
Det här är alltså din originalprodukt i Joyces ända? Ente helt olikt och ungefär lika begripligt, till fjärdedelen alltså.
Javisst. Med rätt nyckel knäcks koden. :)
Jag bad OpenAi ChatGPT att analysera dikten och den skrev:
I'd be happy to analyze your poem! It appears to have a complex and fragmented structure, making use of word play and multilingual puns. It draws upon several sources of inspiration, including James Joyce's "Finnegans Wake", and incorporates elements of both English and non-English languages. The themes and imagery suggest a narrative of personal struggle, loss, and identity, with references to a fragmented family, grief, and a journey through different environments and cultures. The style is experimental, breaking down traditional linguistic and structural boundaries, and the overall effect is one of dreamlike disorientation.
Gurra som jag döpt min ChatGPT till tog sig an att analyser dikten utifrån berättarens relation till "sin mor" respektive "sin far"
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The poem "Egenprodukt" appears to be a stream of consciousness and uses surreal imagery, making it difficult to identify a clear theme or message. However, based on the mentions of the narrator's "Mother" and "Father", it can be inferred that the narrator is reflecting on their relationship with their parents. The description of the "Mother" as a "Motherplane" and "Godmotherchilltie" suggests a mix of reverence and frustration towards her. The mention of the "Father" as a "bastard" who is "long gone" indicates a negative relationship with him. Overall, the relationships with the parents appear to be complex and possibly strained.
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The poem "Egenprodukt" appears to be a stream-of-consciousness style of writing that uses fragmented language and imagery to convey a sense of confusion and disorientation. The narrator seems to be struggling with their relationships with their mother and father, as well as with their own identity. The mother is described as a "Motherplane" and a "stiefmutherly tweeated" figure, while the father is mentioned as "long gone" and "Basturd." The narrator seems to be searching for a sense of connection and stability, but is surrounded by chaos and disruption. It is difficult to determine a clear and specific relationship between the narrator and their mother and father based on the fragmented language and disjointed imagery in the poem.
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The poem "Egenprodukt" is written in a fragmented and non-linear style, making it difficult to analyze the narrator's relationship to his mother and father with certainty. However, certain phrases and words can be interpreted as suggesting a complex and possibly strained relationship with both parents. The narrator mentions "a paterglee abscensfadder" (absent father) and describes him as having a "smell such of anamorph" and being "put on mute and unhimspeccable" (silent and unspeakable). Additionally, the narrator describes his relationship with his mother as being "stiefmutherly tweeated" (stepmotherly treated) and "Godomotherchilltie" (God-motherly chilly). These descriptions suggest a difficult or conflicted relationship with both parents. However, without further context or a more complete understanding of the poem's symbolism, it is difficult to draw a definitive conclusion about the narrator's relationship to his mother and father.
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